Not bad
Clearly there was some effort put into this. It was smooth, nicely designed, and had some hot scenes. You have potential.
Not bad
Clearly there was some effort put into this. It was smooth, nicely designed, and had some hot scenes. You have potential.
Hurrah for retarded soaps
The cap guns were an especially nice touch.
At least the video was smooth and the shots decent. But this wasnt really flash.
Keep trying...
Not much to say about this....if this was supposed to be a random and crudely animated short flash film then you succeeded.
Actually yeah thats what I was going for you're like the 2nd person to notice, everyone else was wondering where the plot was heh.
Uncomfortably amateur but your on to something
This sucked rather badly BUT it has potential if you build on this idea that was obviously spontaneously thought up by a few bored white suburban teenagers.
Viciously superb
Very nicely done. I feel that this kind of creativty deserves to be recognized. I'll look for your work in the future.
Twisted yet strangely fulfilling...
Sick but humerous. Just the way I like them.
Twas a funny little cartoon but...
I have to admit this was funny and rather clever with the animation transitions within the frames. However, I agree with some of the other people when I say this isn't worthy of #3 on the Newgrounds list.
Being a fair critic....
I have to give you some points because of who you are, your talent etc...blah blah. However, that was fucking disgusting and I'm quite certain that you did this only for shock value. Only so you could appease the violent immature masses of NG. Things like this don't help the Jeff Weise's of NG.
Like anime films on fast food restaurants?
Then this is the film for you. Personally, I think its a waste of your talent. Spend your time making something that isnt so....droll and medicore.
Time for me to start putting in my 2 cents worth :)
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Western Michigan University
Kalamazoo, MI
Joined on 6/8/03